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The Thirsty Rose

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The hurtling rain drop

Missed the rose, splat on the street

Like that boy last week







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galbraith.susan
galbraith.susan
2021年5月01日

I can only echo Susan (below) whose comment is right on the nail. Excellent, Glen - and perfect haiku too! Love - Susan G.

いいね!

suegwool
suegwool
2021年4月30日

Oh Glen, so powerful. I love the foreshadowing with the word hurtling, preparing us for the shock of the young death. You have created a profound and moving and heartbreaking vision for us all with so very few words. Brilliant. Love, Susan

いいね!
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