The Thirsty Rose
- glenhaney
- Apr 30, 2021
- 1 min read
The hurtling rain drop
Missed the rose, splat on the street
Like that boy last week
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CHAI WITH GLEN
The hurtling rain drop
Missed the rose, splat on the street
Like that boy last week
I can only echo Susan (below) whose comment is right on the nail. Excellent, Glen - and perfect haiku too! Love - Susan G.
Oh Glen, so powerful. I love the foreshadowing with the word hurtling, preparing us for the shock of the young death. You have created a profound and moving and heartbreaking vision for us all with so very few words. Brilliant. Love, Susan